A few days have passed and Carrie is visiting Regina her and Regina sit in the front stairs '' So after high school what are you doing ?'' Regina asked Carrie.
'' As soon as i turn 18 and or even 19 me and Toby are moving to NYC with sandy so i could go to med school '' Carrie responded.
'' Oh so after this year its done we wont see each other anymore '' Regina cried.
'' I'm afraid so don't worry sweetie we will still skype '' Carrie told Regina.
'' Yeah but its not the same'' Regina told Carrie.
Then they both gave each other a hug..
A Few months later its graduation ..
''' When i first got here i was lost bird i didn't know anything we didn't
know anything just a lost soul we got each other its time to say goodbye i love you all
To the class of 2011 We made it '' Carrie shouted as she gave her speech. Then everyone threw their caps in the air.
'' Wait Carrie cupid dont get off the stage '' Toby spoke.
'' Toby what is it ?'' Carrie asked Toby.
Toby went on the stage he bent down his knees '' Carrie cupid will you marry me would do you me the extraordinary honor of being my wife '' Toby proposed.
'' Yes yes i will '' Carrie cried.
Then her and Toby began kissing Regina and Amanda came up and gave they all hugged each other.
Everyone was taking pictures so much joy.
7 months later...
Carrie and Toby and sandy are getting ready to go to NYC they are moving the diner to
a hot spot in NYC.
Carrie and Regina and Amanda and Toby are the airport along with sandy.
'' So this it after so many memories this it it have a good life i love you all '' Regina cried.
'' Me too '' Carrie and Toby both cried.
Toby Carrie and Amanda both gave each other a hug one last time.
Then Toby Carrie and sandy went to take their flight .
7 Years later.. .
Carrie has a two year son yeah she got pr agent at a early age in her early twenties. Toby now
owns the diner after sandy retired. Regina became a fashion model and is gonna appear in her first magazine cover of Victoria secret. Amanda met a guy and her that guy got married and started a family in Alabama and Regina is the god mother and all 3 share a home.
In (NYC)
Carrie and Toby are at central park with their son and Carrie is expecting a second child. they are now married.
'' i love you only you '' Toby said he then kissed Carrie.
'' Our future is in the sky the stars are shaping shaping stars '' Carrie spoke.
'' i know i never been happy sweetheart '' Toby spoke.
Toby and Carrie their son by name is tobyjr cuddle on the grass of central park.
A few days later.. Carrie is visiting Mr ackles office who has now has lung cancer..
'' Carrie cupid '' Mr ackles spoke .
'' Remember the big memoir we have been working on shaping stars ?'' Carrie asked Mr ackles.
'' yeah ?'' Mr ackles responded.
'' Well its done'' Carrie spoke.
Carrie hands MR ackles the book her memoir shaping stars.
She then leaves the office and Mr ackles reads the book.
Meanwhile ..
Toby is at home and Carrie just arrived home and Carrie still in meds school.
'' I love you so much '' Carrie spoke.
'' I love you too '' Toby spoke.
Then the two along with their son began to cuddle on the couch. Everyone lived happily ever after
Fin.. end of shaping stars ..
Hi everyone Stephanie Precious here hope you enjoyed the ending of shaping stars .. I worked really
hard on it every ones happy. I hope you enjoy reading and coming with me on this journey bye..
Friday, May 24, 2013
Thursday, May 23, 2013
shaping stars part 4 how did you come across my path
Aaron Davis is headed out he pulls out his stuff to make sure he has id and stuff that
identifies him as Jason. Aaron takes Esmeralda and takes her to the house and bounds her.
He begins walking when he begins having flashback's he has a flash black the day of the murder
of the mother and her children in the flash black
Aaron is seen with a person wearing black and saying
'' Hey today we get to finally finish off the cupids remember Carrie will
be at the diner when she crosses you take the van and ran her over of car '' The person
says''
'' I cant I love Carrie cupid I wont murder her '' Aaron tells the guy.
'' Love her because of her your life got ruined you lost the love of life
Esmeralda because of her remember Esmeralda humiliated you
made you feel like trash carrie lied to you she didn't defend you or your
family when your dad was sent to prison she is a evil person remember carrie's
dad didn't defend yours at the trial he just laughed your just silly coward big
coward a wuss '' The guy says.
'' Im not a wuss '' Aaron tells the guy.
Then Aaron remembers getting inside the car with the guy
and he remember seeing the mother and the children making the cross of the
street
'' No its not carrie '' ! Aaron screamed.
Then the flash black ends and Aaron runs into his car and drives away with a mystry person.
Meanwhile...
Carrie is seen walking down the street where she sees Sandy the lady
who owns the diner.
'' Sandy !'' Carrie screamed happy
'' haven't see you in a while whats been up besides the dissapearce of esmermalda.''
Sandy spoke.
Then Carrie gave sandy a hug and she puts on her ipod
'' I miss toby so much I miss him a lot '' Carrie says to her self.
She continues to walk..
As time passes we see Carrie finshing up her freshman year of high school
Regina getting a new job at a café for part time.
Esmemalda manges to escape but still not found and
toby comes back from cali and is getting a surprise to carrie awating her
at the house.
Its now July ..
Carrie just came back from a jog and is seen heading back to the house
where she is staying.
Carrie reliezes the house half empty she takes a sip of water and then gets
angered and throws the glass on the ground " Im not born ordinary and I always love the
wrong people '' Carrie screams to her self.
Carrie then gets her towl and heads to the bathroom there she sees candles light up
and the curtains closed.
'' Holy fuck someone is in here ''! Carrie screamed.
Then the curtains open and toby is there smiling carrie breakdown in tears and kisses toby she
takes off her clothes and hops in the bathroom.
'' How how is possible your here I missed you so much I love you I love you
'' Carrie cried.
'' Regina gave me her keys and I wanted to surprise you I missed you
I love you carrie cupid the first and the last what we have is worth it '' Toby spoke.
'' Yeah it is forever baby '' Carrie said to toby then they made love in the bathtub.
Meanwhile
Aaron then went to the coffee shop down town where he runs into esmermalda still on
the run a undercover police officer is siting there .
'' help help that man is chasing after me he is the guy your looking for
the Alabama lunatic '' !! Esmermalda screamed.
Aaron then pulled his gun and shot esmermalda in the back she fell to the ground.
everyone began screaming then the undercover cop took his gun and shot Aaron in the stomach.
He then fell to the ground and a dying esmermalda is screaming carrie name as she dies on
loosing a lot of blood.
the ambulance comes and the police aresst Aaron and take a dying esmermalda away.
Meanwhile
Carrie and toby are putting on their clothes when they receive a phone call about
what happened.
2 hours later.. Carrie and toby find out esmermalda survived but is paralyed and will remain for the
rest of her life but as carrie sits there
Esmermalda stturs '' im im sorry I love you sorry '' Esmermalda says in few words.
'' I Forgive you I forgive you don't speak '' Carrie cried.
'' To think Jason hawke is really Aaron davis '' Toby said.
Then esmermalda goes into cardic aresst and is dying the doctors take
her into intensive care .
'' Clear 12 1 2 clear 1 2 clear that's it too late '' the docter said.
'' should we call it ?'' One of the docters said.
'' yeah time of death 7;32pm ''The doctors spoke .
They then put esmermalda body into the freezer and carrie is seen breaking into tears.
Days pass and Everyone goes to the funeral.
1 Month later ...
Carrie went to finsh the detention center where Aaron is being held.
She vists Aaron .
'' Didn't you think you show '' Aaron told carrie.
'' I Did you said you liked me you shameless basterd you killed
my father step sister you tried to kill me I might be messed up in
the head but im not cold '' Carrie spoke angered .
'' I did it it was sweet revenge I wanted to get back
at esmermalda for humiliating me remember me
eww boy I wanted to get back at you for not
wanting to love me I wanted to get back at everyone
I didn't kill toby I didn't have time '' Aaron spoke.
'' Me and toby made up he knows you made out with me
and he forgave me hope you rot in prison how did you
come across my path Aaron davis '' Carrie spoke again upset.
'' Wait I love you no carrie have a nice life '' Aaron cried.
Then carrie walked away and that was the last time those
2 will ever see each other.
Time passes 3 yrs pass and carrie is now a senior in high school
and Toby is in collage.
Regina has a new boyfriend sandy plans to retire and give
toby the diner when he is old enough and Amanda is just happy.
Carrie begans to walk and breathes and her and toby for a walk..
end of part 4 shaping stars..
Hi guys Stephanie Precious here hope you enjoy part 4 of shaping stars I changed the plot a
little bit and replaced ms berry with sandy character. I hope you stay tuned because the
next part will be the last and the ending. I didn't want esmermalda to be paralyzed esmermalda
would prefer death that's why I put her character dead and yeah big shocker right? hint hint
everything that's happening carrie is writing it as a book and yeah the big depature happens
in the final part I kinda had planned for toby to come back at the end in part 5 but I thought
hey carrie needs someone and Aaron was gonna try to attempt to murder toby but I didn't
want carries story to be all about misery so I changed that. I love you all bye.
everyone has their story to tell this is mine - carrie cupid
note my editing machine isn't working so ill come back soon to edit this..
identifies him as Jason. Aaron takes Esmeralda and takes her to the house and bounds her.
He begins walking when he begins having flashback's he has a flash black the day of the murder
of the mother and her children in the flash black
Aaron is seen with a person wearing black and saying
'' Hey today we get to finally finish off the cupids remember Carrie will
be at the diner when she crosses you take the van and ran her over of car '' The person
says''
'' I cant I love Carrie cupid I wont murder her '' Aaron tells the guy.
'' Love her because of her your life got ruined you lost the love of life
Esmeralda because of her remember Esmeralda humiliated you
made you feel like trash carrie lied to you she didn't defend you or your
family when your dad was sent to prison she is a evil person remember carrie's
dad didn't defend yours at the trial he just laughed your just silly coward big
coward a wuss '' The guy says.
'' Im not a wuss '' Aaron tells the guy.
Then Aaron remembers getting inside the car with the guy
and he remember seeing the mother and the children making the cross of the
street
'' No its not carrie '' ! Aaron screamed.
Then the flash black ends and Aaron runs into his car and drives away with a mystry person.
Meanwhile...
Carrie is seen walking down the street where she sees Sandy the lady
who owns the diner.
'' Sandy !'' Carrie screamed happy
'' haven't see you in a while whats been up besides the dissapearce of esmermalda.''
Sandy spoke.
Then Carrie gave sandy a hug and she puts on her ipod
'' I miss toby so much I miss him a lot '' Carrie says to her self.
She continues to walk..
As time passes we see Carrie finshing up her freshman year of high school
Regina getting a new job at a café for part time.
Esmemalda manges to escape but still not found and
toby comes back from cali and is getting a surprise to carrie awating her
at the house.
Its now July ..
Carrie just came back from a jog and is seen heading back to the house
where she is staying.
Carrie reliezes the house half empty she takes a sip of water and then gets
angered and throws the glass on the ground " Im not born ordinary and I always love the
wrong people '' Carrie screams to her self.
Carrie then gets her towl and heads to the bathroom there she sees candles light up
and the curtains closed.
'' Holy fuck someone is in here ''! Carrie screamed.
Then the curtains open and toby is there smiling carrie breakdown in tears and kisses toby she
takes off her clothes and hops in the bathroom.
'' How how is possible your here I missed you so much I love you I love you
'' Carrie cried.
'' Regina gave me her keys and I wanted to surprise you I missed you
I love you carrie cupid the first and the last what we have is worth it '' Toby spoke.
'' Yeah it is forever baby '' Carrie said to toby then they made love in the bathtub.
Meanwhile
Aaron then went to the coffee shop down town where he runs into esmermalda still on
the run a undercover police officer is siting there .
'' help help that man is chasing after me he is the guy your looking for
the Alabama lunatic '' !! Esmermalda screamed.
Aaron then pulled his gun and shot esmermalda in the back she fell to the ground.
everyone began screaming then the undercover cop took his gun and shot Aaron in the stomach.
He then fell to the ground and a dying esmermalda is screaming carrie name as she dies on
loosing a lot of blood.
the ambulance comes and the police aresst Aaron and take a dying esmermalda away.
Meanwhile
Carrie and toby are putting on their clothes when they receive a phone call about
what happened.
2 hours later.. Carrie and toby find out esmermalda survived but is paralyed and will remain for the
rest of her life but as carrie sits there
Esmermalda stturs '' im im sorry I love you sorry '' Esmermalda says in few words.
'' I Forgive you I forgive you don't speak '' Carrie cried.
'' To think Jason hawke is really Aaron davis '' Toby said.
Then esmermalda goes into cardic aresst and is dying the doctors take
her into intensive care .
'' Clear 12 1 2 clear 1 2 clear that's it too late '' the docter said.
'' should we call it ?'' One of the docters said.
'' yeah time of death 7;32pm ''The doctors spoke .
They then put esmermalda body into the freezer and carrie is seen breaking into tears.
Days pass and Everyone goes to the funeral.
1 Month later ...
Carrie went to finsh the detention center where Aaron is being held.
She vists Aaron .
'' Didn't you think you show '' Aaron told carrie.
'' I Did you said you liked me you shameless basterd you killed
my father step sister you tried to kill me I might be messed up in
the head but im not cold '' Carrie spoke angered .
'' I did it it was sweet revenge I wanted to get back
at esmermalda for humiliating me remember me
eww boy I wanted to get back at you for not
wanting to love me I wanted to get back at everyone
I didn't kill toby I didn't have time '' Aaron spoke.
'' Me and toby made up he knows you made out with me
and he forgave me hope you rot in prison how did you
come across my path Aaron davis '' Carrie spoke again upset.
'' Wait I love you no carrie have a nice life '' Aaron cried.
Then carrie walked away and that was the last time those
2 will ever see each other.
Time passes 3 yrs pass and carrie is now a senior in high school
and Toby is in collage.
Regina has a new boyfriend sandy plans to retire and give
toby the diner when he is old enough and Amanda is just happy.
Carrie begans to walk and breathes and her and toby for a walk..
end of part 4 shaping stars..
Hi guys Stephanie Precious here hope you enjoy part 4 of shaping stars I changed the plot a
little bit and replaced ms berry with sandy character. I hope you stay tuned because the
next part will be the last and the ending. I didn't want esmermalda to be paralyzed esmermalda
would prefer death that's why I put her character dead and yeah big shocker right? hint hint
everything that's happening carrie is writing it as a book and yeah the big depature happens
in the final part I kinda had planned for toby to come back at the end in part 5 but I thought
hey carrie needs someone and Aaron was gonna try to attempt to murder toby but I didn't
want carries story to be all about misery so I changed that. I love you all bye.
everyone has their story to tell this is mine - carrie cupid
note my editing machine isn't working so ill come back soon to edit this..
Wednesday, May 22, 2013
Shaping stars part 3 Every rose has its thorn..
Its the next day and its a Saturday and Carrie and Esmeralda are taking a morning walk and its sunny out.
Suddenly a black car approaches and stops right in front of Carrie and esmerlamda. A guy wearing a black mask pulls out a gun and pushes Carrie to the ground and kidnaps Esmeralda . '' No give me back my sister ''! Carrie screamed.
Then the guy takes the gun and hits the gun hard on her head causing her to knock her out.
Everything turns pitch black and Carrie is left just bleeding helpless on the ground as the car drives away.
A Random guy is seen jogging and falls on the ground he has tripped over Carrie.
'' Oh my holy s*** i tripped over a lady she needs help ''! The guy screamed he then pulls out his phone and calls 911. The ambulance arrives and they take Carrie to the hospital meanwhile while Carrie is knocked out memories are being shown in carries mind.
A memory of when she is child is shown and Esmeralda is seen putting cake a birthday cake its Carrie sixth birthday and her Esmeralda are so close like bffs. Then it fades and another memory of Carrie at age ten at the diner eating a mini cheeseburger laughing with her mom and dad and Esmeralda all happy "i love you Esmeralda '' Carrie says in the memory. then it fades and Carrie is still age 10 shes siting with her dad when a vehicle unknown killer shows up and shoots carries dad leaving him dead Carrie is seen screaming another memory shows in her mind where with then Esmeralda boyfriend is seen kissing Carrie and firtliting with her when Esmeralda comes in and starts crying and screaming at Carrie '' i hate you ill never forgive you '' Esmeralda screams. Then memory of Carrie mom getting a heart attack right in front of Carrie is also in carries mind memories from the mental clinic and the diner are shown so are the high school ones. Carrie soul is then seen running threw 2 doors and a white light . Carrie cannot feel a thing or two her head wound is serious . Then Carrie soul returns to her body and Carrie wakes up .. Carrie is seen coughing alot everything is blurry when she awakes shes sees Jason Regina there.
'' wakey wakey sleepy head'' Jason says to Carrie.
'' hi Jason what are you doing there ?'' Carrie asks Jason .
'' just needed to see you don't you remember when we were kids
you made out with me i was your first kiss'' Jason says to Carrie.
'' No we didn't i met you in high school my first kiss was with Aaron Davis and he is missing your not him''
Carrie says to Jason.
'' No Carrie I'm Aaron Davis i changed my name and identity got a face transplant I'm
being held hostage by my father '' Aaron (Jason) spoke.
" Name one thing only the real Aaron would know '' Carrie asks Aaron (Jason).
'' Me and you loved each other i look Esmeralda virginity when me and you sneak out of
your house the night your dad died we tried to go on a motorcycle ''my father owned yeah we went
on it but then we fell off leading to that scar on your left elbow we lied saying Esmeralda put a knife
just to save your ass ''Aaron (Jason )you were only almost 11 to 12 yrs Spoke.
Regina was sleeping so she had no idea what was happening.
'' Oh my god it is you is your father related to the crimes that's been happening '' Carrie asked Aaron (Jason).
Before Carrie could speak again her phone rang and Toby was calling Aaron then took carries phone and opened the back took out the battery and threw the phone in the garbage.
Aaron began to kiss Carrie and they made out .
3 Weeks later..
Carrie was receiving treatment at home Regina and Amanda parents and Amanda and Regina began to take care and help Carrie out since Esmeralda was still kidnapped and missing .
Carrie then took her journal and put it under the cabinet so no one could see it or find it.
'' Its amazing you know I'm in high school and we have the rest of lives not just me us '' Carrie spoke.
'' Yeah its amazing so after high school Amanda is moving to California and I'm planning to move to NYC sick of Alabama what do you wanna do ?" Regina asked Carrie as she took a sip of her milk .
'' i don't know go to medical school become a Doctor '' Carrie responded then Carrie and the girls began to eat lunch.
Meanwhile ...
we don't see the real culprit of who's been responsible for tragics but we see esmerlmada bound but her mouth isn't covered.
'' How long are you cont this sick game is Carrie next?'' Esmeralda asked Culprit.
Culprit then said '' uh no i love Carrie Toby is next ?'' Culprit responds.
'' Leave my sister alone you freak '' !! Esmeralda screamed.
then time passed meanwhile ( In Cali)
Toby is home in Cali on his laptop he is on his email checking it
he gets a email he opens it it says
your next so is Carrie cupid watch out and play my game ''
Culprit.
Toby then closed his laptop and his photo in a picture friend of Carrie fell
and it began to rain Toby felt a huge pain in his heart.
'' Carrie ''! he screamed.
Meanwhile (in Alabama )
Carrie went to school Carrie then met with her tutor since she was failing and she needed the help.
She went to visit Mr ackles the school tutor.
'' so i know if i don't pass i fail and i don't want that i want Yale university '' Carrie said to Mr ackles.
'' yeah your are ms cupid take our a notebook and lets begin '' Mr ackles said.
'' I cant i have to go i cant be here '' !! Carrie randomly screamed.
'' Carrie your gonna fail '' Mr ackles spoke.
'' I don't know a tutor i need someone I'm going threw alot '' Carrie cried.
'' Whats wrong Carrie I'm a self help therapist i help people you should come '' Mr ackles offered Carrie.
'' Whats the cost you act you know me well you don't I've been spit on abused all my life
IM surprised I'm not fucked up '' Carrie yelled .
'' Carrie i know life been tough you i might be a old man but I'm not completely lost my mind free for you '' Mr ackles spoke.
'' Yeah thanks and know something my first crush Aaron Davis fell for someone that isn't me every rose has its thorn old man '' Carrie spoke. She was then about to leave
'' Wise words collage future '' Mr ackles spoke. Then Carrie left Carrie thought in her mind he is fifty seven what he know but she decided to go to the self help sessions. Carrie went on she was reflecting on her future what is my future who am i just a weird freak Carrie said to her self.
Meanwhile Esmeralda escaped from the warehouse where she was being held. '' Come back you little slut '' Culprit says as he chases after her. Cultript then grabs Esmeralda and stabs her in the arm. The face is finally shown and the face is no other than Aaron Davis aka his fake identity Jason hawke.
End of shaping stars part 3..
Hi guys Stephanie Precious here and yeah this story is complicated if you wanna carries story from the start when she was born let me and ill write a prequel . Anyways so yeah Jason hawke is fake identity real name is Aaron Davis aka cold psycho path we will find out his motives in in the next part
where its the end of the school yr and Carrie preparing for summer. We will find out almost everything about him and stuff theres 3 part lefts i think yeah i know how the story gonna end and its a happy ending spoiler alert there is a death and a departure coming back hoping your liking shaping stars and ill see you soon. question below did you think Jason aka Aaron was the sociopath he does have a partner in crime . Let me know below bye.
Suddenly a black car approaches and stops right in front of Carrie and esmerlamda. A guy wearing a black mask pulls out a gun and pushes Carrie to the ground and kidnaps Esmeralda . '' No give me back my sister ''! Carrie screamed.
Then the guy takes the gun and hits the gun hard on her head causing her to knock her out.
Everything turns pitch black and Carrie is left just bleeding helpless on the ground as the car drives away.
A Random guy is seen jogging and falls on the ground he has tripped over Carrie.
'' Oh my holy s*** i tripped over a lady she needs help ''! The guy screamed he then pulls out his phone and calls 911. The ambulance arrives and they take Carrie to the hospital meanwhile while Carrie is knocked out memories are being shown in carries mind.
A memory of when she is child is shown and Esmeralda is seen putting cake a birthday cake its Carrie sixth birthday and her Esmeralda are so close like bffs. Then it fades and another memory of Carrie at age ten at the diner eating a mini cheeseburger laughing with her mom and dad and Esmeralda all happy "i love you Esmeralda '' Carrie says in the memory. then it fades and Carrie is still age 10 shes siting with her dad when a vehicle unknown killer shows up and shoots carries dad leaving him dead Carrie is seen screaming another memory shows in her mind where with then Esmeralda boyfriend is seen kissing Carrie and firtliting with her when Esmeralda comes in and starts crying and screaming at Carrie '' i hate you ill never forgive you '' Esmeralda screams. Then memory of Carrie mom getting a heart attack right in front of Carrie is also in carries mind memories from the mental clinic and the diner are shown so are the high school ones. Carrie soul is then seen running threw 2 doors and a white light . Carrie cannot feel a thing or two her head wound is serious . Then Carrie soul returns to her body and Carrie wakes up .. Carrie is seen coughing alot everything is blurry when she awakes shes sees Jason Regina there.
'' wakey wakey sleepy head'' Jason says to Carrie.
'' hi Jason what are you doing there ?'' Carrie asks Jason .
'' just needed to see you don't you remember when we were kids
you made out with me i was your first kiss'' Jason says to Carrie.
'' No we didn't i met you in high school my first kiss was with Aaron Davis and he is missing your not him''
Carrie says to Jason.
'' No Carrie I'm Aaron Davis i changed my name and identity got a face transplant I'm
being held hostage by my father '' Aaron (Jason) spoke.
" Name one thing only the real Aaron would know '' Carrie asks Aaron (Jason).
'' Me and you loved each other i look Esmeralda virginity when me and you sneak out of
your house the night your dad died we tried to go on a motorcycle ''my father owned yeah we went
on it but then we fell off leading to that scar on your left elbow we lied saying Esmeralda put a knife
just to save your ass ''Aaron (Jason )you were only almost 11 to 12 yrs Spoke.
Regina was sleeping so she had no idea what was happening.
'' Oh my god it is you is your father related to the crimes that's been happening '' Carrie asked Aaron (Jason).
Before Carrie could speak again her phone rang and Toby was calling Aaron then took carries phone and opened the back took out the battery and threw the phone in the garbage.
Aaron began to kiss Carrie and they made out .
3 Weeks later..
Carrie was receiving treatment at home Regina and Amanda parents and Amanda and Regina began to take care and help Carrie out since Esmeralda was still kidnapped and missing .
Carrie then took her journal and put it under the cabinet so no one could see it or find it.
'' Its amazing you know I'm in high school and we have the rest of lives not just me us '' Carrie spoke.
'' Yeah its amazing so after high school Amanda is moving to California and I'm planning to move to NYC sick of Alabama what do you wanna do ?" Regina asked Carrie as she took a sip of her milk .
'' i don't know go to medical school become a Doctor '' Carrie responded then Carrie and the girls began to eat lunch.
Meanwhile ...
we don't see the real culprit of who's been responsible for tragics but we see esmerlmada bound but her mouth isn't covered.
'' How long are you cont this sick game is Carrie next?'' Esmeralda asked Culprit.
Culprit then said '' uh no i love Carrie Toby is next ?'' Culprit responds.
'' Leave my sister alone you freak '' !! Esmeralda screamed.
then time passed meanwhile ( In Cali)
Toby is home in Cali on his laptop he is on his email checking it
he gets a email he opens it it says
your next so is Carrie cupid watch out and play my game ''
Culprit.
Toby then closed his laptop and his photo in a picture friend of Carrie fell
and it began to rain Toby felt a huge pain in his heart.
'' Carrie ''! he screamed.
Meanwhile (in Alabama )
Carrie went to school Carrie then met with her tutor since she was failing and she needed the help.
She went to visit Mr ackles the school tutor.
'' so i know if i don't pass i fail and i don't want that i want Yale university '' Carrie said to Mr ackles.
'' yeah your are ms cupid take our a notebook and lets begin '' Mr ackles said.
'' I cant i have to go i cant be here '' !! Carrie randomly screamed.
'' Carrie your gonna fail '' Mr ackles spoke.
'' I don't know a tutor i need someone I'm going threw alot '' Carrie cried.
'' Whats wrong Carrie I'm a self help therapist i help people you should come '' Mr ackles offered Carrie.
'' Whats the cost you act you know me well you don't I've been spit on abused all my life
IM surprised I'm not fucked up '' Carrie yelled .
'' Carrie i know life been tough you i might be a old man but I'm not completely lost my mind free for you '' Mr ackles spoke.
'' Yeah thanks and know something my first crush Aaron Davis fell for someone that isn't me every rose has its thorn old man '' Carrie spoke. She was then about to leave
'' Wise words collage future '' Mr ackles spoke. Then Carrie left Carrie thought in her mind he is fifty seven what he know but she decided to go to the self help sessions. Carrie went on she was reflecting on her future what is my future who am i just a weird freak Carrie said to her self.
Meanwhile Esmeralda escaped from the warehouse where she was being held. '' Come back you little slut '' Culprit says as he chases after her. Cultript then grabs Esmeralda and stabs her in the arm. The face is finally shown and the face is no other than Aaron Davis aka his fake identity Jason hawke.
End of shaping stars part 3..
Hi guys Stephanie Precious here and yeah this story is complicated if you wanna carries story from the start when she was born let me and ill write a prequel . Anyways so yeah Jason hawke is fake identity real name is Aaron Davis aka cold psycho path we will find out his motives in in the next part
where its the end of the school yr and Carrie preparing for summer. We will find out almost everything about him and stuff theres 3 part lefts i think yeah i know how the story gonna end and its a happy ending spoiler alert there is a death and a departure coming back hoping your liking shaping stars and ill see you soon. question below did you think Jason aka Aaron was the sociopath he does have a partner in crime . Let me know below bye.
Tuesday, May 21, 2013
shaping stars part 2 never love a regina like you love your other friends
'' I'm just so happy to have you here in my arms '' Toby said to Carrie.
'' Yeah me too but reality bites and right now we just cant be together '' Carrie spoke .
'' I know i know that '' Toby cried.
Then Carrie started to walk away Toby tapped her back I'm not letting you go in this rain I'm calling a cab and taking you home alright cupid?'' Toby spoke.
'' Alright call a cab '' Carrie mumbled.
Meanwhile...
'' Only two days to your wedding huh ezi ? '' Esmeralda friend spoke.
'' Yeah and the best part Carrie cupid is outta the way'' Esmeralda spoke in a evil laugther. 2 days later it was a Saturday and with Carrie not wanting to go to the wedding goes to Regina house. At the wedding time passed and Esmeralda was walking down the isle with a modern wedding dress and her hair curled .
Accompanying Esmeralda is her friend. She reaches the point where she was with the priest and with Toby standing there it is raining by the way. Before the priest could even speak Toby just leaves and runs down the isle he realizes and is smart about it he loves Carrie and cant marry her. '' Toby get back here !'' Esmeralda screams. As Toby leaves the church he runs in to Amanda.
" Wheres Carrie ?'' Toby asks Amanda.
" Why would you care your married aren't you ?" Amanda speaks angrily to Toby.
" No i didn't marry her i didn't marry Esmeralda i love Carrie only Carrie !" Toby tells Amanda he gets emotional and Amanda realizes he is telling the truth.
" Shes at her friend Regina's house walk down 4 blocks then make a left '' Amanda tells Toby.
Toby then runs..
Meanwhile.. (at Regina's house )
Carrie is depressed and looks at her feet again with the mark of her extra toes and her scar on her left elbow.
'' Ill never be normal no '' Carrie tells Regina.
'' Shut up will you you gotta get self confidence '' Regina says to Carrie in a angrily way.
Carrie then stars at the window and then all of a sudden here's the door knocking and banging.
Regina then looks at the window
'' oh look its neighborhood pretty boy Toby bell ?'' Regina tells Carrie.
'' Toby ''? Carrie says with an excitement .
'' yeah i knew that guy in Cali '' Regina says to Carrie.
'' open the door open the damn door !'' Carrie yells at Regina.
'' Its complicated you guys only know each other for half a year the first time you meet you have sex same day you like automatically in love hes in senior in HS and is getting married your love story is fucking complicated fine ill hope the door '' Regina speaks to Carrie.
Regina opened the door and Toby ran into Carrie hugging her holding her tight .
'' Did you marry her ?'' Carrie asked Toby.
'' no i couldn't '' Toby says.
Carrie then put her finger around Toby's lips and then kissed it.
'' While you self centered love birds make love and have sex on my couch which I'm assuming I'm go on eBay and order my makeup kit and a new couch before my mom gets hope which is impossible'' Regina said.
'' no we are not I'm here to say goodbye for now i gotta go back to Cali for the remainder of the school year its nearly mid way anyways i wont be back till summer i gotta take care of my sick grandma '' Toby says.
'' That's means we cant be together'' Carrie asked Toby.
'' I'm afraid not '' Toby responds sadly.
'' When you are leaving ?'' Carrie asked Toby.
'' it was supposed to be next month but its next week'' Toby said.
'' Alright then buy for now '' Carrie cried
'' wow you ditch a girl on her wedding day then leave within a week wow just wow Toby bell '' Regina says to Toby saractilly.
4 Months later its March
Amanda and Regina and Carrie are siting down at the cafe.
'' Okay are we gonna talk i mean Carrie the only guy you been talking about and writing about in that damn journal is Toby when Jason here on your knees you gotten self centered '' Regina said.
Carrie starts sipping on her iced coffee.
'' Excuse me self centered whose the one who runs into a guys bed when she needs comfort '' Carrie said to Regina angrily.
'' You all year only Toby Toby what about us what about Amanda you don't call me anymore and only bring up your self in a conversation bitch look at your self '' Regina said to Carrie.
'' Look at my self go away I'm who i am '' Carrie speaks.
'' go away Carrie cupid you are not the same when i first you yeah you were a little bit messed up but i still liked you hanging with you now you just turned into a arrogant bitch ''Regina spoke to Carrie.
'' Girls stop it i hate it when you fight '' Amanda spoke.
'' Shut up Amanda you rarely been there these last 4 months and Regina boo your whore '' Carrie spoke.
'' How rude this isn't my Carrie oh my '' Amanda spoke in such disappointment .
'' Lets go Amanda me and you are over until you shake up your life and remember who you are '' Regina spoke.
Then Amanda and Regina started to walk away facing away Carrie know had no friends she only had her self.
As Carrie was walking and she left the diner she saw Jason the guy she rarely mind to making out with a girl in some car.
Carrie stopped and looked.
Jason opened his window shield
'' Yeah privacy please ?'' Jason asked Carrie.
'' your in public are'nt you supposed to be taking me to the dance ? '' Carrie asked Jason
'' No i liked you you had a boyfriend were done and i saw the whole thing one thing never love a Regina like you love your other friends '' Jason told Carrie then he took his car and drove away. 2 Months gone by its now may and Carrie is in school '' oh god forgive me for my stupid actions'' Carrie said to her self.
It was lunchtime and Carrie came over to Regina and Amanda table.
'' What you want ?'' Regina asked Carrie.
'' I'm sorry i pushed away my only two allies I've been self centered forgive me i understand if you don't your the only people who truly expected me'' Carrie cried.
'' We will give you another chance cause we love you we your friends'' Amanda and Regina both spoke.
'' Did you here what happened to esmerlmada friend the one at the wedding ?'' Amanda asked her friends.
'' What happened '' Carrie said as she took a seat down at the lunch table.
'' She got murdered in front of the diner same spot where the lady and her kids got ran over almost 2 yrs ago '' Amanda spoke.
'' Yeah its strange we need to think about her future girls we go to the diner all the time '' Regina spoke.
'' Yeah we are dealing with a pshyco path a crazy pshyopath beneath us '' Carrie spoke then she took a spoonful of Regina chicken salad.
End of Part 2 of shaping stars...
Hi Guys Stephanie precious here just answer one question shaping stars is a fictional story though characters Regina and Amanda were inspired by real life people Regina was inspired by a friend who we go back and fourth loving and hating each other in a very friendship way and Amanda was inspired by my best friend Rachel who's always there for me so that's why Amanda character is so sweet but yeah my best friend in real life doesn't know by the friend who was inspired by Regina and well Carrie i learned alot during the school year and made mistakes just like she did so i put her born with 2 extra toes since I'm born with 2 extra fingers and Jason and Toby and Esmeralda are just fictional characters inspired by well the world of writing and thanks for reading part 2 love is complicated so is life that's why i put the story like that. in the beginning where Carrie witness the whole car accident that was inspired by a memory when i was little me and not my evil sister and mom were by a toy store and we left i was like five or four and we went up where around taco bell a mother and her 2 children i think 4 and 7 got ran over by a van and i remember just being there just wondering wow people get killed easy these days. But the whole pshcyo path story is fake I'm just writing it to make a point about people around you anyways hope you enjoyed stay tuned for part 3 in part 3 little sneak peak Carrie starts thinking about her life and what she wants ..
'' Yeah me too but reality bites and right now we just cant be together '' Carrie spoke .
'' I know i know that '' Toby cried.
Then Carrie started to walk away Toby tapped her back I'm not letting you go in this rain I'm calling a cab and taking you home alright cupid?'' Toby spoke.
'' Alright call a cab '' Carrie mumbled.
Meanwhile...
'' Only two days to your wedding huh ezi ? '' Esmeralda friend spoke.
'' Yeah and the best part Carrie cupid is outta the way'' Esmeralda spoke in a evil laugther. 2 days later it was a Saturday and with Carrie not wanting to go to the wedding goes to Regina house. At the wedding time passed and Esmeralda was walking down the isle with a modern wedding dress and her hair curled .
Accompanying Esmeralda is her friend. She reaches the point where she was with the priest and with Toby standing there it is raining by the way. Before the priest could even speak Toby just leaves and runs down the isle he realizes and is smart about it he loves Carrie and cant marry her. '' Toby get back here !'' Esmeralda screams. As Toby leaves the church he runs in to Amanda.
" Wheres Carrie ?'' Toby asks Amanda.
" Why would you care your married aren't you ?" Amanda speaks angrily to Toby.
" No i didn't marry her i didn't marry Esmeralda i love Carrie only Carrie !" Toby tells Amanda he gets emotional and Amanda realizes he is telling the truth.
" Shes at her friend Regina's house walk down 4 blocks then make a left '' Amanda tells Toby.
Toby then runs..
Meanwhile.. (at Regina's house )
Carrie is depressed and looks at her feet again with the mark of her extra toes and her scar on her left elbow.
'' Ill never be normal no '' Carrie tells Regina.
'' Shut up will you you gotta get self confidence '' Regina says to Carrie in a angrily way.
Carrie then stars at the window and then all of a sudden here's the door knocking and banging.
Regina then looks at the window
'' oh look its neighborhood pretty boy Toby bell ?'' Regina tells Carrie.
'' Toby ''? Carrie says with an excitement .
'' yeah i knew that guy in Cali '' Regina says to Carrie.
'' open the door open the damn door !'' Carrie yells at Regina.
'' Its complicated you guys only know each other for half a year the first time you meet you have sex same day you like automatically in love hes in senior in HS and is getting married your love story is fucking complicated fine ill hope the door '' Regina speaks to Carrie.
Regina opened the door and Toby ran into Carrie hugging her holding her tight .
'' Did you marry her ?'' Carrie asked Toby.
'' no i couldn't '' Toby says.
Carrie then put her finger around Toby's lips and then kissed it.
'' While you self centered love birds make love and have sex on my couch which I'm assuming I'm go on eBay and order my makeup kit and a new couch before my mom gets hope which is impossible'' Regina said.
'' no we are not I'm here to say goodbye for now i gotta go back to Cali for the remainder of the school year its nearly mid way anyways i wont be back till summer i gotta take care of my sick grandma '' Toby says.
'' That's means we cant be together'' Carrie asked Toby.
'' I'm afraid not '' Toby responds sadly.
'' When you are leaving ?'' Carrie asked Toby.
'' it was supposed to be next month but its next week'' Toby said.
'' Alright then buy for now '' Carrie cried
'' wow you ditch a girl on her wedding day then leave within a week wow just wow Toby bell '' Regina says to Toby saractilly.
4 Months later its March
Amanda and Regina and Carrie are siting down at the cafe.
'' Okay are we gonna talk i mean Carrie the only guy you been talking about and writing about in that damn journal is Toby when Jason here on your knees you gotten self centered '' Regina said.
Carrie starts sipping on her iced coffee.
'' Excuse me self centered whose the one who runs into a guys bed when she needs comfort '' Carrie said to Regina angrily.
'' You all year only Toby Toby what about us what about Amanda you don't call me anymore and only bring up your self in a conversation bitch look at your self '' Regina said to Carrie.
'' Look at my self go away I'm who i am '' Carrie speaks.
'' go away Carrie cupid you are not the same when i first you yeah you were a little bit messed up but i still liked you hanging with you now you just turned into a arrogant bitch ''Regina spoke to Carrie.
'' Girls stop it i hate it when you fight '' Amanda spoke.
'' Shut up Amanda you rarely been there these last 4 months and Regina boo your whore '' Carrie spoke.
'' How rude this isn't my Carrie oh my '' Amanda spoke in such disappointment .
'' Lets go Amanda me and you are over until you shake up your life and remember who you are '' Regina spoke.
Then Amanda and Regina started to walk away facing away Carrie know had no friends she only had her self.
As Carrie was walking and she left the diner she saw Jason the guy she rarely mind to making out with a girl in some car.
Carrie stopped and looked.
Jason opened his window shield
'' Yeah privacy please ?'' Jason asked Carrie.
'' your in public are'nt you supposed to be taking me to the dance ? '' Carrie asked Jason
'' No i liked you you had a boyfriend were done and i saw the whole thing one thing never love a Regina like you love your other friends '' Jason told Carrie then he took his car and drove away. 2 Months gone by its now may and Carrie is in school '' oh god forgive me for my stupid actions'' Carrie said to her self.
It was lunchtime and Carrie came over to Regina and Amanda table.
'' What you want ?'' Regina asked Carrie.
'' I'm sorry i pushed away my only two allies I've been self centered forgive me i understand if you don't your the only people who truly expected me'' Carrie cried.
'' We will give you another chance cause we love you we your friends'' Amanda and Regina both spoke.
'' Did you here what happened to esmerlmada friend the one at the wedding ?'' Amanda asked her friends.
'' What happened '' Carrie said as she took a seat down at the lunch table.
'' She got murdered in front of the diner same spot where the lady and her kids got ran over almost 2 yrs ago '' Amanda spoke.
'' Yeah its strange we need to think about her future girls we go to the diner all the time '' Regina spoke.
'' Yeah we are dealing with a pshyco path a crazy pshyopath beneath us '' Carrie spoke then she took a spoonful of Regina chicken salad.
End of Part 2 of shaping stars...
Hi Guys Stephanie precious here just answer one question shaping stars is a fictional story though characters Regina and Amanda were inspired by real life people Regina was inspired by a friend who we go back and fourth loving and hating each other in a very friendship way and Amanda was inspired by my best friend Rachel who's always there for me so that's why Amanda character is so sweet but yeah my best friend in real life doesn't know by the friend who was inspired by Regina and well Carrie i learned alot during the school year and made mistakes just like she did so i put her born with 2 extra toes since I'm born with 2 extra fingers and Jason and Toby and Esmeralda are just fictional characters inspired by well the world of writing and thanks for reading part 2 love is complicated so is life that's why i put the story like that. in the beginning where Carrie witness the whole car accident that was inspired by a memory when i was little me and not my evil sister and mom were by a toy store and we left i was like five or four and we went up where around taco bell a mother and her 2 children i think 4 and 7 got ran over by a van and i remember just being there just wondering wow people get killed easy these days. But the whole pshcyo path story is fake I'm just writing it to make a point about people around you anyways hope you enjoyed stay tuned for part 3 in part 3 little sneak peak Carrie starts thinking about her life and what she wants ..
Monday, May 20, 2013
shapping stars part one never have i ever
Its the year 2006 and Carrie cupid and her step sister Esmeralda are taking a walk and its summer and Carrie is gonna enter 7th grade in the upcoming fall. As Carrie is walking she witnesses a car accident in front of bells diner. A mother and her 2 children are hit by a SUV and the car spatters blood. Then wit in Min's ambulances and police cars arrive at the scene . " Are they hurt omg ?" Carrie worried. A Random neighborhood lady comes up to her Esmeralda and says " They all dead the car came out of no where " .
Everyone gathers at the scene and a young Carrie stars as police come and forensics and take the dead bodies away. A Couple days later.....
Carrie and Esmeralda are at the diner when sandy the owner of the diner who already know them since they were like babies comes up to them
" i hope you guys are doing alright i mean after last year after the passing of your mom things must be tough " Sandy speaks to Carrie and Esmeralda.
" Its alright here Carrie doesn't want to get the surgery for her extra toes i mean how do you expect to wear nice pretty opened toe shoes with such marks ?" Esmeralda spoke.
" Shut up so any news sandy ?" Carrie asked.
" Yeah besides my lung cancer we have a new waiter the other one Joe got fired for sexually harassing young children and you know the kids love coming here after school for my special burgers and fries anyways he is a teen hes a hottie with black hair and blue eyes and beautiful anyways he isn't all that but our new waiter name is Toby bell my nephew Hey Toby get your lazy butt over here i want you to meet someone !" Sandy spoke.
As Toby came over with his waiter uniform Carrie opens her eyes wide and she had felt something she had never felt before was it infatuation lust or actually love?"
" What you want you old hag i just got back from Cali i miss my hometown what else can you brag about ?" Toby spoke.
Then he stared into Carrie eyes.
" These girls are like my daugthers meet Carrie Cupid and Esmeralda Tompkins's " Sandy introduced Carrie and Esmeralda to the young handsome Toby.
" Carrie is one beautiful lady and Esmeralda is eh okay i must know Carrie " Toby spoke in such emotion.
" Hi I'm Carrie " Carrie blushed while talking to Toby.
" Oh shut up Carrie this could be my future husband move " Esmeralda spoke rude to Carrie.
" Your the one who needs to move Carrie speak to me after my shift such rude people in this city of Alabama" Toby spoke in a happy emotion.
Then 2 hours passed...
Carrie returned to the diner and Esmeralda stayed home.
Carrie went to the back of the diner where she saw Toby arm he then pulled her into the back where it used to be tables but just empty abanobed . " Why did you bring me here why its so empty and empty " Carrie asked Toby.
" Hey how old are you and why do i love you so much ?" Toby asked Carrie.
" I'm twelve and i guess i can ask you the same question?" Carrie spoke.
" I can fight this feeling rushing threw my heart its like i have heaven when I'm with you " Toby spoke in such love emotion.
" Have you ever made love to a young lady before are you a virgin ?'' Carrie asked Toby.
" Yeah once with my neighbor I'm fifteen i lost it at age twelve with my ranging hormones are you a virgin '' Toby said.
'' Yeah but I'm a prolonged virgin it may sound crazy but i hate being a virgin i don't believe in innocence '' Carrie responded.
Toby and Carrie began to make love on the cold ground they didn't care they used their clothes as blankets and both of their bare naked bodies experienced the emotion of love. '' Just kiss me softly don't stop just kiss me '' Carrie spoke in a slow voice.
4 Hours later...
Carrie woke up it was like 2am she panicked.
'' Holy f**** I'm dead if i don't go home I'm dead '' !! Carrie spoke.
" I'll drive you home on my motorcycle '' Toby spoke tired as he awoke.
'' Thanks your a life saver'' Carrie spoke all happy and she gave Toby a hug.
'' Anything for my Rose for my precious rose '' Toby whispered.
Then he took Carrie on his motorcycle and went home. It was night no one will forever ever .
He drove her home and Carrie aunt Flo was standing right on front of the house.
'' I can explain "! Carrie screamed.
" No i know whats going on sandy called and said you were at the diner she also said she heard some loud noise " Aunt Flo spoke.
''It wont happen again i promise " Carrie spoke.
" good if it does your getting grounded for a month." Aunt Flo spoke.
Then Toby drove away on his motorcycle..
2 Months later. FYI here is a quick summary of what happened in those 2 months
Toby ended his a couple of days relationship with Carrie and a confused Toby
got bribed and became engaged to Esmeralda and Carrie has regrated losing her virginity
even though she was a prolonged virgin what Esmeralda doesn't know Carrie and Toby are having a sexual love affair behind her back .
Its September and Carrie just entered eighth grade her along with her friend Amanda walk the halls of melbury middle school. Carrie realizes her aunt is dying and only has a few months left to live. Esmeralda still tortures her in a verbal way .
'' We have the rest our lives high school collage marriage and a whole life '' Amanda spoke .
'' Yeah your a Guerra you get to to have those things i cant I'm a cupid '' Carrie spoke.
" Yeah but what happened with Toby ?" Amanda asked Carrie .
" Hes moving and i don't give a f**ck about boys anymore they just crush hearts '' Carrie spoke.
As the school day ended and months passed it was nearly Christmas when Amanda and Carrie came home they found Aunt Flo there dying.
'' Promise me you'll live your life and move on with a great love promise me you'll move on and be happy Carrie '' Aunt Flo spoke . Aunt Flo died with her eyes open and there was no life in her . Carrie went into shock and was assumed crazy.
Though Carrie was put locked up in the mental asylum no one knows she is just pretending to get way from her sister Esmeralda.
A year has passed
Esmeralda and Toby were still engaged though Toby recklessly cheats on her with girls who resemble Carrie hinting Carrie is the only girl he really loves.
Carrie goes on her first day of high school and meets sassy girl Regina.
'' I can take you around the world my name is Regina and here is this my friend ex lover Jason '' Regina spoke .
'' Yeah thanks Regina and hi Jason '' Carrie spoke all 3 of them went into their classes. At the end of the day Carrie took the bus that goes straight to the diner and she arrived at the diner. She saw Toby just siting there at a bench.
'' are you gonna pretend that you don't know me or what ?'' Carrie spoke and Toby turned around.
" Carrie your back i missed you so much '' Toby cried .
he then hugged her.
''Wanna know something while i was locked up '' Carrie asked Toby.
'' what''? Toby asked Carrie.
'' Never have i ever stopped loving you '' Carrie cried.
It started to rain and Carrie and Toby kissed in the rain for hours....
End of Part one of Shaping stars ..
Hey guys its Stephanie precious here thanks for reading part one of shaping stars i love you all this took a hour and half to write and edit thanks for reading and yes my main character is writing this in her journal as it happens i hope you all enjoyed yes love is complicated thanks for reading and stay turned for part two bye..
FYI a instant attraction love at first sight did happen between our 2 main characters Toby and Carrie.
Everyone gathers at the scene and a young Carrie stars as police come and forensics and take the dead bodies away. A Couple days later.....
Carrie and Esmeralda are at the diner when sandy the owner of the diner who already know them since they were like babies comes up to them
" i hope you guys are doing alright i mean after last year after the passing of your mom things must be tough " Sandy speaks to Carrie and Esmeralda.
" Its alright here Carrie doesn't want to get the surgery for her extra toes i mean how do you expect to wear nice pretty opened toe shoes with such marks ?" Esmeralda spoke.
" Shut up so any news sandy ?" Carrie asked.
" Yeah besides my lung cancer we have a new waiter the other one Joe got fired for sexually harassing young children and you know the kids love coming here after school for my special burgers and fries anyways he is a teen hes a hottie with black hair and blue eyes and beautiful anyways he isn't all that but our new waiter name is Toby bell my nephew Hey Toby get your lazy butt over here i want you to meet someone !" Sandy spoke.
As Toby came over with his waiter uniform Carrie opens her eyes wide and she had felt something she had never felt before was it infatuation lust or actually love?"
" What you want you old hag i just got back from Cali i miss my hometown what else can you brag about ?" Toby spoke.
Then he stared into Carrie eyes.
" These girls are like my daugthers meet Carrie Cupid and Esmeralda Tompkins's " Sandy introduced Carrie and Esmeralda to the young handsome Toby.
" Carrie is one beautiful lady and Esmeralda is eh okay i must know Carrie " Toby spoke in such emotion.
" Hi I'm Carrie " Carrie blushed while talking to Toby.
" Oh shut up Carrie this could be my future husband move " Esmeralda spoke rude to Carrie.
" Your the one who needs to move Carrie speak to me after my shift such rude people in this city of Alabama" Toby spoke in a happy emotion.
Then 2 hours passed...
Carrie returned to the diner and Esmeralda stayed home.
Carrie went to the back of the diner where she saw Toby arm he then pulled her into the back where it used to be tables but just empty abanobed . " Why did you bring me here why its so empty and empty " Carrie asked Toby.
" Hey how old are you and why do i love you so much ?" Toby asked Carrie.
" I'm twelve and i guess i can ask you the same question?" Carrie spoke.
" I can fight this feeling rushing threw my heart its like i have heaven when I'm with you " Toby spoke in such love emotion.
" Have you ever made love to a young lady before are you a virgin ?'' Carrie asked Toby.
" Yeah once with my neighbor I'm fifteen i lost it at age twelve with my ranging hormones are you a virgin '' Toby said.
'' Yeah but I'm a prolonged virgin it may sound crazy but i hate being a virgin i don't believe in innocence '' Carrie responded.
Toby and Carrie began to make love on the cold ground they didn't care they used their clothes as blankets and both of their bare naked bodies experienced the emotion of love. '' Just kiss me softly don't stop just kiss me '' Carrie spoke in a slow voice.
4 Hours later...
Carrie woke up it was like 2am she panicked.
'' Holy f**** I'm dead if i don't go home I'm dead '' !! Carrie spoke.
" I'll drive you home on my motorcycle '' Toby spoke tired as he awoke.
'' Thanks your a life saver'' Carrie spoke all happy and she gave Toby a hug.
'' Anything for my Rose for my precious rose '' Toby whispered.
Then he took Carrie on his motorcycle and went home. It was night no one will forever ever .
He drove her home and Carrie aunt Flo was standing right on front of the house.
'' I can explain "! Carrie screamed.
" No i know whats going on sandy called and said you were at the diner she also said she heard some loud noise " Aunt Flo spoke.
''It wont happen again i promise " Carrie spoke.
" good if it does your getting grounded for a month." Aunt Flo spoke.
Then Toby drove away on his motorcycle..
2 Months later. FYI here is a quick summary of what happened in those 2 months
Toby ended his a couple of days relationship with Carrie and a confused Toby
got bribed and became engaged to Esmeralda and Carrie has regrated losing her virginity
even though she was a prolonged virgin what Esmeralda doesn't know Carrie and Toby are having a sexual love affair behind her back .
Its September and Carrie just entered eighth grade her along with her friend Amanda walk the halls of melbury middle school. Carrie realizes her aunt is dying and only has a few months left to live. Esmeralda still tortures her in a verbal way .
'' We have the rest our lives high school collage marriage and a whole life '' Amanda spoke .
'' Yeah your a Guerra you get to to have those things i cant I'm a cupid '' Carrie spoke.
" Yeah but what happened with Toby ?" Amanda asked Carrie .
" Hes moving and i don't give a f**ck about boys anymore they just crush hearts '' Carrie spoke.
As the school day ended and months passed it was nearly Christmas when Amanda and Carrie came home they found Aunt Flo there dying.
'' Promise me you'll live your life and move on with a great love promise me you'll move on and be happy Carrie '' Aunt Flo spoke . Aunt Flo died with her eyes open and there was no life in her . Carrie went into shock and was assumed crazy.
Though Carrie was put locked up in the mental asylum no one knows she is just pretending to get way from her sister Esmeralda.
A year has passed
Esmeralda and Toby were still engaged though Toby recklessly cheats on her with girls who resemble Carrie hinting Carrie is the only girl he really loves.
Carrie goes on her first day of high school and meets sassy girl Regina.
'' I can take you around the world my name is Regina and here is this my friend ex lover Jason '' Regina spoke .
'' Yeah thanks Regina and hi Jason '' Carrie spoke all 3 of them went into their classes. At the end of the day Carrie took the bus that goes straight to the diner and she arrived at the diner. She saw Toby just siting there at a bench.
'' are you gonna pretend that you don't know me or what ?'' Carrie spoke and Toby turned around.
" Carrie your back i missed you so much '' Toby cried .
he then hugged her.
''Wanna know something while i was locked up '' Carrie asked Toby.
'' what''? Toby asked Carrie.
'' Never have i ever stopped loving you '' Carrie cried.
It started to rain and Carrie and Toby kissed in the rain for hours....
End of Part one of Shaping stars ..
Hey guys its Stephanie precious here thanks for reading part one of shaping stars i love you all this took a hour and half to write and edit thanks for reading and yes my main character is writing this in her journal as it happens i hope you all enjoyed yes love is complicated thanks for reading and stay turned for part two bye..
FYI a instant attraction love at first sight did happen between our 2 main characters Toby and Carrie.
Wednesday, May 15, 2013
rewritting part one of shapping stars
rewriting shapping stars part 1
Guys im rewriting shapping stars part 1 it didn't make any sense and I don't like it one bit
Guys im rewriting shapping stars part 1 it didn't make any sense and I don't like it one bit
plot of short novela shapping stars
Carrie Cupid a young teenager who documents her freshman yr of HS in her journal wasn't born ordinary and never really lived a normal teenage life. She has been deeply in love with who she considers the wrong people . Carrie world is about to change when she first enters high school and has a chance of life love and the thing she wants the most besides love friendship. As the people in Carrie life leave and go. Carrie discovers maybe the stars in the sky are moving around shaping for a amazing future.
this story was written by the one and only Stephanie Precious
this story was written by the one and only Stephanie Precious
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